spousal abuse, multation,rape & conspiresy to commit rape for the cabbie & Debbie seeing she let the cabbie rape her husband & did nothing to stop it!!! seeing she already gave up the baby before he had a chance to help raise the baby it would've been cheeper & facing less jail time than simply divorcing him for cheating!!!

an interesting rework oy your story very welldone more resistance would have been better but overall a great story to date more please

I see you have reworked your first story.  Your additions are fine. they improve your tale.  The grammar etc. are better also.  This indicates considreable reworking.  The justification for the abortion os still very nebulous.  If she were so disposed why would she not have used birth control?  It is generally a lot less damaging to the body.  Why does she hate him so.  She appears to have gone insane, excuse me, irrational from the time they met and courted.  An infidelity would justify some vengeance but she executes pure unabashed cruelty.  Under the strain of those conditions, It is likely that any post hypnotic suggestion would be overridden.  It is time to go to the police, report the abuse and get a divirce lawyer, both for protection.
I will look forward to your next work.