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Birth and Awareness
by Angel O'Hare

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Comment by Silvia. on 08/25/10
LOL... Angel O'hare. LOL!
I AM A REAL WOMAN, and I don't like your stories.
Silvia.

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 07/21/10
LOL..."Silvia" strikes again and "j" I can't make any sense out of his comment he sure loves GOD though. LOL...

Hey "j" let go and let God. Why are you reading in this genre anyway?

Hey Silvia, I know you don't like my writings so try another author already. LOL...

Comment by Silvia. on 06/27/10
Bad......................
Silvia.
Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 09/29/07
ANGEL, I KNOW THIS IS RELATED TO A FEW OTHER STORIES YOU HAVE OUT THERE. BUT THIS IS THE FIRST ONE WHERE RICKY IS THE NARRATOR. I LIKE THE WAY HE KNOWS WHAT'S HAPPENING.  
Comment by j on 07/31/06
what the crap.have you ever seen a child a god born.natural or c-section.god makes your path right or wrong.society can give you justice but God will justify the end to all
Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 07/30/06
A very beatiful story! A baby can feel what happens in his or her world so they can also sense how people react to them. Where we all go when we are really sad - inside to a safe place or crawling into a booze bottle - is of course another matter.

I really loved the part with mom and their closeness. It is sad that father and some of the siblings were "dark ones", but that is all too realistic.

Hugs,
Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)



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