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Birth Control?
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mickey D on 07/28/19
Have you ever tried this, with pills? I got SO sick!



Comment by Mariah on 05/12/13
Another nice story Janet, but I almost expected father to tell the doctor to cut Mary's breasts off and lipo out her hips then pump the fat in her belly where he thought it belonged.  If I was grounded like her I would send everybody straight to my father and demand that he explain in every detail why he grounded me, let him deal with the pain he caused me since he did the grounding.

Comment by Elsie on 06/02/10
A wonderful story, I just wish that all of us could have the same happy change. It has gotten better over the years but I not not think that we will have such a chance as your story.

Comment by Aleesha on 06/02/10
Another great story Janet. In your last sentence you said that Mary was now 22 but I would have liked to have read that she had her esx change operation.

Comment by CAD on 03/29/09
BIRTH CONTROL
I loved the story it was very sweet as most of your stories are keep up the great writing.

Comment by Silvia on 01/29/09
Lovely story.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/30/07
Well, Janet the big difference in this story is that Mary never does have the operation. She still has boys parts. A story of acceptance and love mixed with anguish and anger. Quite a cocktail of ingredients there

Comment by Rone Welles on 10/28/06
  Some times the right choice is going to be hard to do ... But he did it and that turned out good .. good story and a great ending ..

thank you Janet for a lovely story ... XO Rone


Comment by jasmine on 01/27/05
well. very sweet. but a question i hope i can get answered.
would taking birth controll pills have that big of an effect. like undergoeing HTR.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 07/26/02
Although it's true that some of Janets stories have that familiar link to others of her's but then too everyone else has something in common with either they're own stories or of others.

Janet has always given us a wonderful selection to pick from and continues this tradition with this story.

A you boy descovers that dressing with his sister for so many years brings him to realize his desire to be a real girl and his sisters reluctance to use her contraceptives allows Mary to emerge even though it takes 2 years before the effects of the pills have a chance to really benifit the wishes of this newly developed girl.

I like Janets stories and that's not something I've hidden either. When an author such as Janet appears on a site such as this I can only say thank you to her for allowing us a wonderful place to gain some relief from out somewhat normal lives.

Diane

Comment by Susan Ashley on 07/10/01
I thoroughly enjoyed your story.Don't worry about the carpers. You can't please everyone. Please do keep writing.

Comment by Gurleen on 06/04/01
It's a real treat to read a story where the protagonist wants the changes. Most CD/TV/TS stories have someone forcing the changes on an unwilling subject, who then suddenly discovers that (s)he wanted it all along. IMO, that doesn't work either dramatically or psychologically.
I did have some problems with the story though. The scene with the doctor was very underwritten, and I have no idea what the doctor is supposed to have done to her. And a lot of the tension seems to go out of the story after that scene.
I have to agree with the previous poster a bit too. Nobody changes their orientation because they change gender. Maybe the change allows her to express what she felt all along?

Comment by Conniption on 06/02/01
Oh, God.  Another story with a subplot that's a bit too gay for my tastes.  Did you ever bother to explore how these characters can instantly go from being straight to suddenly liking men?  Never! It's the same plot over and over and over and over and over.  The characters change a little.  The locale and context changes a little.  I give up.  I'm glad other people like your stories, and you write them very well.  Nonetheless, I'm outa here. If I read one of your tales, I've read 'em all!

Comment by Paula Jutras on 06/02/01
another wonderful story. You've always been one of my favorite writers on the board and continue to be so.



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