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Birthday Girl
by Gingerfred Man

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Comment by guy on 11/24/10
Dude, not cool. That's f****** gross. A father and son pleasuring eachother? What the f*** is wrong you? You're a pedophile.

Comment by Alana1960 on 09/14/02
GingerfredMan Stories continue to delight me. This is another fun tale. He has such a cute Sissy-fied Universe all constructed in his perverse imaginative mind.
While I sometimes wish his main characters were a bit older it seems that GFredMan's post popular stuff utilizies the younger set.
Still, I eagerly await each story.

This one does not disappoint. It's sooooooo out in your face. LOL.
As for the cock talk a previous reviewer didn't like...well that's G-Man's style and I don't expect him to change anytime soon.
These stories are XXX, only without Vin Diesel.

Comment by Paula on 09/13/02
Better than BIRTHDAY GIRL the video. I enjoyed the story here  though I think I'd of enjoy it just as much without all the cock talk in it.



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