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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
lx3wcz Spot on with this write-up, I really suppose this website needs much more consideration. I?ll most likely be again to read much more, thanks for that info. Comment by crorkz on 08/05/14 UiahfR I really liked your article.Really thank you! Awesome. Comment by Kristi Lynne Fitzpatrick on 10/23/13 Excellent fun and simple story just what the doctor ordered. You really did communicate a spirit of joy and purpose and most of all friendship and love. Comment by Randhil on 12/13/11 Such a deep anwesr! GD&RVVF Comment by jerry on 05/24/08 great story. shows a positive attitude and the love and understanding possible between family members. it should go this way more often. good read. Comment by WannabeGinger on 01/28/08 Lovely story...... Lucky Lexi! And I do agree with Auntie..... Everybody needs a Ginger! Maybe Lexi can explore Girl-Girl relationships in your next chapter??? LOL WbG Comment by Meggan on 08/09/07 Wonderful Story! It really makes me wonder how my life could have been if I had had the nerve to tell my parents the same thing. Now I'm 37 and don't know if I'll ever get the chance Lexi got. Please keep these types of stories coming. Comment by Early June on 06/30/07 I liked the other two stories so well, I had to read this one to finish off your offering. This story was as well written as the other two. Your editing for spelling and grammar are great. These chracters were a bit more developed than the others, but probably because you had more story to develope them in. Shirley was believable, the father was believable. I am not so certain that Dave was. Even if the tranformation was excellent and practiced for years, I suspicion a best friend would notice little "givaways" that would lead them to discovery. Like the little kid that discovers his uncle in a Santa suit, it is not the suit that gives it away but the person inside. If you really know a person, there are just too many indications of the person underneath. In any case, the story was great. I hope to see more stories from you. Thank you for sharing these. Comment by Rose on 06/19/07 Hi Staci Marie, Comment by (AJ) Eric on 06/19/07 REALLY sweet. I enjoyed it a lot. Comment by suna on 06/19/07 A delighful story, perhaps you will continue ?? |
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