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The Birth of Cheetah
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Comment by Bruce on 11/26/09
very nicely done.... Comment by Great Sage on 02/21/09 Highly enjoyable but I would love to see a sequel as too much remains unfinished, I found parts of it rather intense but it is a good thing to see someone willing to deal with difficult subject matter. Comment by Jerrie526 on 11/24/04 I read the first part of this story more than two years ago and never found the remaining parts until just recently. This was a very good series and since it has been more than two years since it was posted, it is high time that a sequel was done. There are way too many questions that remain unanswered. I am not a begger but I am reduced to it: PLEASE, I *BEG* OF YOU, WRITE THE SEQUEL! I NEED TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS AFTER THIS. Comment by Scrambler_J on 09/08/02 WOW! As a comic book nutcase for many years now, this story was a nice spin on one way the future of the Marvel Universe could go. Also as a big fan of Kitty, I was pleased to see her up and around in this story. Karen and Sam are great as are the First Sister/Cat Pack. I hope this was just the start of their saga and look forward to seeing more of them. Since I never got into the role playing games I can say that if they are anything like this story I would have fun playing around in them. Comment by arkytech on 09/07/02 I've really been enjoying this story. . . Please post part 3, as I don't want to undergo withdrawl pains. Comment by KR on 09/07/02 I like this story, from the background early in #1 on. From what others tell me, Sam's doing whatever Karen asks him to is typical of guys who are head-over-heels in love with a girl. Comment by Nora Elizabeth on 09/06/02 Wonderful story Stephanie! I just love the comic book style superhero(ines)and you've certainly created a winner! Please continue with a lot more episodes of 'The Cheetah'. Comment by ed on 09/06/02 fan fucking tastic,... more please...grovel grovel grovel Comment by Merodda on 09/06/02 A nice little story, and with an ending that just BEGS for a follow up. I'll be looking forward to it. |
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