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B is for Bethany - The End of an Era
by Bethany Jacques

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Comment by Sangi on 08/08/21
You are the best crossdress fiction writer I’ve ever read.  Although I try and resist reading your stuff makes me hard … your stories should be collected and published.  If I can be of any service …

Comment by mike on 07/23/11
the story is fantastic , however the subject matter is very sad . I hope that it is truely want you want , godspeed Adraine

Comment by Tina on 06/24/04
I'm glad to see that this real life story - assuming it is just that - is not the end of your writing as already there is more to read.  I always have enjoyed your stories and IRL (I learn't that one today) you did the walk around the block in this one that I have done so many times with much the same emotions (though without your ending!) What is real life, what is fantasy? I hope you are happy

Love Tina  

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/22/04
Very sad.



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