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Bit of a Shock
by Jane Hudson

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Comment by julie j on 07/19/05
a good story but very fast going a bit of polishing and spell check it will be even better

Comment by Chrisl on 12/28/02
A good story, I enjoyed it but hope you don't mind a suggestion that you ask on the cyberboard for an editor to help you polish it a bit.
Little typo's and errors would be removed with your permission and the story would be even better. I don't have the skill to help.
Thanks for the story.
Hugs Chrisl.

Comment by Paula on 12/28/02
enjoyable story.



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