Very dark indeed...as dark as it is improbable.

Far too fictitious to be believed, not only that, the very nature of the supposedly ill bred individual would never be advised by any educated person to receive such a punishment since the punishment could not possibly work on a character with such a disposition. Pure fantasy.

again this is not my cup of tea but i do agree a lesson had to be learn no one but no one has right to commit rape its a story that all to much happens in society

All I can say is that this was not my cup of tea.

an intresting story but the pace was to fast and it couldhave been a lot longer

Good road less traveled story.  Sounds like he was a thouroughly nasty character, though, more than just "a normal Tennage tearaway".  He seems a bully and a whiner who got a just though unusual punishment but hasn't learned a thing from it.  One thing, you wrote he was "just short of 16"; that doesn't seem nearly enough time till he turned 16 for the hormones, particularly in pill form, to have the effects you describe.

A different take than most of the stories here.

A story that brings the emotions to the surface, and the twist really turns the knife to set the reader thinking.

Bitterness is better than violence, but don't let the bitterness consume.

Thank you for having the guts to write and post the story, certainly got me reacting.

Wow that a hitter.I have a story coming up called the service you might like it .But this is darker than that, but yes the bad must be shown with the good side of TG .Just because I love my new life as Jane don't mean others would always want it.Keep up the good and interesting work