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Black Lace
by Jacki Pett

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Comment by Rizki on 01/05/13
um LOL but why isn't Natalie Portman listed as will win best acserts, there's literally no doubt that she will win that, I respect your opinion totally I just thought it was strange, pretty much every single prediction I've seen has listed her as the winner. Her performance with enchanting and involved a lot more physical work than Annette Benning's, not that Annette Benning wasn't good. Interesting though, why don't you think Natalie will win?

Comment by Katherine on 09/19/11
If infortmaoin were soccer, this would be a goooooal!

Comment by ashley on 10/02/10
nice one here

Comment by jenniferlyn on 03/13/10
part 2 definitely needs to be published as to what has happened on the attempt of reaching home

Comment by juliej on 07/10/07
a great story that was a an excellent read but needs to be continued i know its complete but their is so much more you could do with it well done

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/06/07
So do the bad girls win yet again?  Jackie is such a great writer but she never seems to actually finish stories.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 04/17/01
It seems to me that with the compliments that Jacki has recieved on this story it's now about time she continued with it. Her skills at story telling are unequaled excepting for a few other very talented authors. This story tells of a journey that's being taken by an unwilling guy, who unfortunately or fortunately depending on your point of view is in BIG trouble. Well written? Hey, this is a great story that has all the makings of something terrific. Again, the author has shown her skills, and since it was written in 1999, I'm sure that Jacki, has now exceeded all those early flaws new writers have, if there werre any. And now can pickup where she has left off. Lest I not mention not only her talented story telling is evident, but her ability to properly formulate the structure of her sentences and paragraphs along with the use of words is a wonder to behold. If this reader comment doesn't get her to continue with this story, I give up.
Jacki, IS an insperation to those who would like to try their hand at writing. How about it Jacki???? Are you going to inspire someone?????

Comment by Francesca Barrie on 04/15/01
An entertaining story which ended too soon for me. I do like your style. There is so much scope for a sequel I suspect this was intentional. I think you are really good at this story writing.

Comment by Markusv67 on 01/05/01
Jackie I desparately need you to write part 2 to this story.  This is definitley one of the better ones I've read.  Ever since I've read this one I've looked at strip clubs and their employees in a whole different light.  Can you also change Wayne's name to Mark.  I'm kidding I'm kidding.  Thanks for a great read.  Please give birth to   Wayne the stripper soon.  Markv



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