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Blackmail
by Danielle13

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Comment by ashley on 08/10/13
terrific story AND a terrific  how to  for giving a good BJ !!!

Comment by Cecil on 10/28/07
Loved your story, keep up the good work.

Comment by Samantha on 02/12/07
love the story but no ending plese finish this story so we can see what happens to the poor guy being forcibly feminized.

Comment by marcus on 01/12/07
Didn't read the whole thing. Read until I came to the line:

"If he could really tell than I should take one until I figured out what I was going to do. I took the pill and brushed my teeth."

Nobody could be that stupid and if the author was that lazy with the plot I had no real interest in the rest.


Comment by Denise on 12/19/06
I just love your stories, finally finish them all.  You write very well, makes me wish I was living the story!

Comment by dixie/doug on 02/03/06
MMMMMmmmmmmmm!!  One of the best E R O T I C  stories i've read in quite some time!!   There are lots of sexy stories, far too many dirty stories--- and only a few really good EROTIC fiction works.
 PLEASE continue this one!!
I love the way you've developed  'her' developing submission,, and the way she struggles with it before slipping ever deeper into her destined role.

 i'm really hoping you'll pick this one up again, and give us more!

hugs....

dixie

Comment by Sissy Phyll on 01/30/06
This is a really great and easy to believe story.  Danielle is so frightened and yet so eager for all these things to happen to her. She is so obedient to her master and lover Ill bet she never realized that she was this sissyand had been longing for this attention.  Thats back in every sissies mind I think.   Write more -----   Love and XXXXXX     from Sissy Phyll

Comment by Pam on 01/28/06
Such a great story.  I have to agree with everyone that I would love to see chapters 4-5-6 and more.  You tell a wonderful story and i do hope you add more to this series.

Comment by juliej on 01/24/06
an intresting but unusual story but well worth the read welldone

Comment by Michelle on 12/31/04
One of the best stories that I have read in a long time. It just begs for Chapters 4, 5, 6 etc  etc to be added.

Comment by juliej on 05/20/04
he got far more than expected a good story and a lot of blackmail what a perv still he seemed to be enjoying it great story

Comment by Pammy on 01/23/04
I simply love this story so far, and I agree with those above, force more feminization, and sexual servitude, but make her love it too......turning a previously straight male into loving sucking cock and anal is fabulous to read about.   Keep up the good work, and please keep going. XO Pammy

Comment by Diane on 01/15/04
Although married I would enjoy being this girl to a point. I would love to have someone blackmail me to be his girl on occassions. But not so sever just a once or twice a month thing would be fun. Please keep up the good writing and continue this story but don't let it get out of hand so as not to be somewhat real. diane

Comment by Ladonna on 01/12/04
When do we get the continuation of this story. I liked the first part, especially the photos

Comment by Bobbiexr on 01/11/04
What happened to the rest of this FABULOUS story? It started so well, and suddenly, nothing.

Comment by stan on 12/25/03
great opening

Comment by julie on 03/26/03
An interesting beginning to the story to short to make a propoer comment but so far so good i wait to read the next part

Comment by Chastity Anne on 09/18/02
You have written the first part of what is so far a very well written and thought out story.  So very many of the stories that deal with the concept of force, sexual servitude, feminization and the like do not acknowledge that those of us reading these stories want to be forced as we would readily trade places with the submissive characters in a heartbeat.  Although the stories that deal with men feminizing themselves or being forcibly feminized are interesting, they really are not on point with the interests of those of us who (although wanting it) want to be forced into sexual servitude once we are feminized.  

I love that your main character is in a situation where he has no choice - that he is being effectively blackmailed into sexual servitude.

In your next part, I do hope you push both the feminization and sexual servitude much much farther - making some things permanent (e.g., pierced ears, pierced nipples, tattoos, more hormones, collagen enhanced lips) and make "her" serve and service her new master as he desires whenever he desires however he desires.


Comment by sabrina sweete on 08/18/02
Great story, but i wonder if you have permission to use the pics that you have used. The girl in them has her own website and if you don't have her permission, that would be a bad thing.
Feel free to email me if you need info on the pics.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 08/18/02
(S)he should find a way to turn the tables on the bastard - or just shoot him.

Comment by Stefani V. on 08/18/02
Wow, what a tale.  I enjoyed it immensely and particularly the photos that were included in the story.  And for once, the photos actually went along with the story.  This really gave your story the edge, because we read so many 'real' blackmail stories it doesn't grab you anymore.  The other thing is that this story could have been real.  Keep up the good work, I hope to read a lot more of your work.


xoxoxo
Stefani V.



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