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Black and White
by Lucy Lou

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Comment by Royal CBD on 03/02/21
kEmbjd Really enjoyed this article. Keep writing.

Comment by link building on 07/18/14
Eocvzk Awesome article.Really thank you! Fantastic.

Comment by a kept sissy on 07/08/10
had a black dominant boyfriend, detroit police officer, serviced him and two of his friends for just short of three years.  loved it, called me their little white princess.  i can relate to some of the comments here and the story, nothing more erotic than serving a truly dominant and sophisticated black well endowed man...so hot!

Comment by John Inferior Whiteman on 03/18/08
I too realise we whites owe a debt to all blacks for our past ill treatment and should submit to the superior blackman's commands and wishes for they are the true masters to whom we should all become worthless slaves. I would be proud to offer myself, my wife and my daughters to the all powerful black cock.

Comment by Luv2Worship Superior Black Men on 02/02/08
All we whites are inferior to Superior Black Men & we must submit to and worship the Superior Black race.  We should all be on our knees worshipping Black cock & eagerly swallowing every drop of delicious Black cum!  We whites should also lick big Black balls and rim Black ass too.


Comment by Ana on 08/16/02
I liked your story, enticed my mind. Sounds like something for me. Thanks

Comment by Nancy Ann on 09/08/01
Delightfully nasty. And i'll echo the other's, add more and make them longer, but in any case am enjoying.

Comment by Chastity Anne on 06/01/01
I too have enjoyed reading the story thus far and am looking forward to a future and hopefully longer segment at that time.  Am wondering how the key words were provided for in the story description when those parts of your story have not yet been posted.  In any event, please continue soon as I see so very many possibilities and directions you can go with where this has started.

I love the fact that Lisa was given the antidote as I find these stories to be more enjoyable when the person is "forced" to act in a way that they would not otherwise act.

Comment by P B on 04/17/01
Verey good can not wait for part four soon please

Comment by Calesta on 03/08/01
Love the story so far can't wait for
it to really get going. Next part should
be longer with more of the story.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/26/01
agreed. More of a teaser but interesting to catch my attention.

Comment by Ariel on 02/26/01
More of a teaser than a story. I realize that you are planning to continue, but I would suggest that you write a little more before you post next time. By all means, please continue!



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