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Blaze
by Maddie V

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Comment by Jim Karner on 07/13/18
    It's all phantasy but what a wonderful story. There are a few minor errors for an editor to correct - e.g. "His self" ? - but with such a vivid imagination, you should continue writing as a professional.

Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 09/26/09
WOW! You really are great! Please don't stop writing, we  want more stories from you! We love your stories!
PLEASE,WRITE MORE ASAP!
A lot of kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by paul on 09/13/08
Thank You for a wonderful story, please any more chapters about blaze.  

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Comment by Elaine on 05/27/06
Is there any chance that you will be adding a second adventure to this awsome series? I love your writing Maddie, the concept and details remind me alot of the White Wolf world and your writing skills seems to be as good if not better than other writers doing similar work based on pen and paper RPGs.

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Comment by Ollie Hallsworth on 03/28/05
Me again. i am deeply disappointment that these stories have been brought to an end. i want more!!! these stories are great and i want blaze 7 to come out soon.

Comment by Ollie Hallsworth on 03/20/05
I love this story, i have read up to chapter 5 in a day because i love it so much. Maddie i love this, you have come up with a basic idea and evolved it into something thrilling and cleverly intriguing, if you haven't already you should publish your work as i believe the whole world should be given the privilage to read this great work of art as a book. if you published this you could be the next J.K. Rowling.

Comment by egaskrad on 02/15/05
Just want to say I enjoy story very much. I am up to chapter 3 and I recall seeing a "time able" instead of a "time table".
Anyway, keep up the good work.

Comment by Alex on 02/12/05
This story was wonderful. It's as good as any Morpheus story.  Contratulations.    

I would love to read more adventures with Jess. Please continue!

Comment by dolfin1 on 02/12/05
I for 1 sincerly hope that this is not the end of Blaze as you I think have the making of a wuonderfull and on going story here please I hope that you will wright more as I really enjoied it


sincerly dolfin1



Comment by JosieP on 02/11/05
A corkin' good read from beginning to end. Thanks!

Comment by ted on 12/25/04
love this one and would realy love to read more of Blaze
as this is very good

Comment by Cobra on 12/02/04
Great story, more chapters Please!


Comment by Nellie D on 10/31/04
After fifth part: This is a very interesting story set in a world much different that we know. The transformations are incredable and the results amazing. Vampires, werewolves and altereds .. OH MY!!!

Maddie has given us very good writing with vivid descriptions and interesting characters. I can't wait for the next installment.

Thank you Maddie!

Comment by Danny on 10/30/04
Great story. I have to agree with the other commentators, that this will be a very good one indeed. Personally can't wait for the next installment, and hope they're will be many to follow it, keep up the good work ;)

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 10/25/04
I don't usually read sci-fi, but I do keep my eyes and ears open for the good ones. This is one of the good ones and I hope to see this one added to soon. No criticisms here, you write what you want to the way you want to. This is good stuff.

Huggles
Angel

Comment by Diane Castle on 10/12/04
Okay, Maddie has confirmed that there is a significant chunk missing between the parts labeled '2' and '3' here.  But I have every confidence that she'll get things straightened out when she has the time.  Just so you know...

Love,
Diane

Comment by Diane Castle on 10/11/04
This story is shaping up to be as much fun as "Flight of the Griffin" (which I also really enjoyed).  So how can this be the first comment?  Please keep going with this one.  I hope to see more emotional development in Jess, as she adapts to her powers and her new life.

I do have one less-than-fangirl comment.  It appears that you have left out some major events between part 2 and part 3.  Part 2 now ends with Jess turning her foes into crispy critters.  Part 3 picks up well after Beowulf has picked up Jess and Cole.  I would suggest that you revise part 3 to start with Jess being taken by Beowulf and then meeting The Twins, whoever they are, because all of that is missing.  I'm assuming that's just an editorial issue, like what happened recently with Starwolf's Whateley Academy story in Sapphire's Place.  So please don't take this comment personally.

Thanks for your fascinating stories,
Diane



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