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Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 11/02/09
I'm sorry Marina, but I didn't like this story! Comment by Lisa Kaufmann on 06/09/09 WOW!! Sure liked the story. Wish that part 2 actually was available. If you are still out there Marina 12, please write it and continue the story. Comment by Jerry AKA Teri Lynn on 08/31/08 This was a Fab story please finish it U have so many fans that love it Thanks Teri Lynn Comment by Molly on 05/23/08 Whoa there... REEEEEWRIIIIIIIITE!!!! Like ceeicon wrote, but I'll do it myself. The author writes: Comment by riottgrrl on 08/17/07 It's August of 2007. Five years ago, M12 promised a continuation with a plot twist. I'm sad to see that M12 seems to have fallen off the face of the earth. Comment by d.o. on 07/24/06 its 7/06 where is part 2? Comment by karen keith on 01/23/06 this is one of my all time favorites i would love to see it finished! I also love your drawings Comment by Chris W on 02/19/04 I am not one to complain but, it is now 2004 almost two years. It is time to finnish this one and put it to bed. You started it please finnish it, OK? Comment by ceeicon on 02/26/03 let him say just once enough is enough. he's doing her a favor above and beyond even family. Comment by a fan on 09/18/02 it's a great story and i am holding my breath for the second part. there are so many places to go with this, bachelorette party, rehersal dinner, shopping with other brides maids, all this with a kid who really isn't open to it. oh please finish this. your art is what really makes it all happen. please write another chapter so i can start breathing again. thanks Comment by cm on 09/09/02 love the story ,i cant wait to see whats next hope its soon Comment by marina12 on 09/02/02 My sentiments exactly Wendy--after all, this is a Marina 12 story.-----but i plan some stuff that will appease some of the others too---but somewhat differently ;-) Comment by Wendy on 09/02/02 Just a lovely story so far. No unpleasant sex and it describes an entirely credible situation. I really look forward to part 2, but please don't let him grow to like his new image. Its much more fun when the poor boy can't wait to get back to pants, but has to put up with skirts! Comment by Joanna on 09/01/02 Cute, like the way you worked him up to the dressing part, not liking it but discovering it feels so good. am looking forward to part II Comment by Rose on 09/01/02 Wow! What a great story. Wouldn't it be geat if all families were like that. Comment by Rose on 09/01/02 Wow! What a great story. Wouldn't it be geat if all families were like that. Comment by Charmanda on 08/31/02 I love the story, Marina! Your drawings add a lot... I always enjoy your art, and it's clear that you must put a ton of time into it. One thing I've noticed is that you tend to draw fewer drawings through the transition, and more before or afterwards. Obviously it's your call, but maybe some more close-up kinda stuff during the transition would be something to experiment with. Just my 2 cents! Look forward to seeing more of your stories! Comment by Bobbi on 08/31/02 If they want the perfect wedding then I don't understand why they would trust him to be a bridesmaid. That could ruin the wedding more then having one less bridesmaid. Just get rid of one of the men and you have five men on each side. Perfect. :) |
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