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Comment by Silvia. on 02/23/09
I think that they might teach a lesson to bob without transforming him into a slave. Comment by juliej on 04/22/08 good plot line intersting story enjoyable but could be continued Comment by michelle on 09/26/04 Awesome! Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/23/04 Margaret and mike better watch there backs. Sally might soon reach the "Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose ." point, and the more sissy and submissive when the breaking point is reached, the more violent the reprisal. And assault weapons are legal again. Comment by Elizabeth Rees on 09/21/04 I thought the twist would be something like that, but then it's hard to be genuinely surprising in a TG story. But, this was a good story. Comment by alison on 09/19/04 I loved it, i could see it coming and still loved it. I would like to be in a situation like that where a man and woman want me to be their woman here in minnesota. Comment by Andrea Foster on 09/19/04 This is a neat little story. It's well written, and there's quite a nice twist in the tail. |
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