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 Don't know why I was drawn to your story, or what inspired you to write it, or what the future holds for us,but,I had FUN - every step of the way,- loved the twists, -great imagination,wellwritten, & excellantly corriographed !! - - Hoping U don't stop writing!
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An interesting story though the structure was confusing enough that I had to read a couple times to fully grasp what happened to both main characters and the whole zombie issue.

Obviously the the author is very inexperienced and the story is full of all the common beginners' mistakes - sudden leaps in the story line, wild and inexplicable switches between first and third person perspective, lack of proper development of interesting plot details etc.

But for a debut story it's not bad at all. The story idea is a good one and behind all those mistakes there seem to be some good author talent. I've read much worse than this from people who evolved into really skilled writers.

So, Spacecase Sweety, you're not nearly there yet but it's a good start and if you keep working at it and are willing to learn you may become a really good author. I would also recommend you find yourself a good editor to help you weed out some of the most obvious blunders.