Great hmamer of Thor, that is powerfully helpful!

Barbara claims that this story "is complete as it stands and needs nothing further." That surprises me. The story is told "in media res" (a literary device -- literal translation: it starts "in the middle of things") with the main character "currently suspended a metre off the floor of the cellar wearing a few bits of pink latex and a variety of leather restraints, my breasts ache and every time I move, my braids whack me in the eye!" The rest of the story is told in flashback, with the implicit promise that we will eventually discover how the main character wound up in his predicament -- that is part of the device called "in media res." The story ends abruptly, however, well before it completes its arc back to the beginning where it began.

The implication is clear: this is only the first part of an incomplete story. Of course Sharon (among others) would like to see it completed, as would I: I have no more desire to be left "suspended in a cellar" than would the main character!

The first part of this story is really great i lookforewards to the next part in due course you arte a very goood writer maddie and i would like a lot more of this story its great dont leave in suspence for to long

I usually don't read fantasy stories per se, but I like the way this one starts.  It might be plausible but then again, maybe not.  But nevertheless, it is entertaining and I eagerly await another of your prolific presentation.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Sharon wants you to continue this. Actually the story is complete as it stands and needs nothing further. I don't usually read bondage stories, but this one was done with taste. Not too bizarre as some go, and it actaully had a plausible plot. I enjoyed this story very much. Keep up the good work.

Barbara Lynn Terry

A good first half now finish it LOL

lovely tale dear