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Bob and Jeanette's New Girl
by JamieLin

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Comment by Leia on 03/04/13
Good story, a little fast, but I love the fantasy. I have had similar ones myself.
Hope to see more from you.

Comment by Tallin on 12/12/11
I was really confused, and this answeerd all my questions.

Comment by juliej on 08/23/06
an interesting story line bit fast &does not make mention of the time out shopping etc with her mistress i feel it needs more of a story linebeforte it can make a great read not bad could be a lot better



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