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Bobbie on the Boardwalk
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Comment by Dwyn on 01/02/19
I loved this sequel. It seemed I could feel the air on his legs. I could feel his fear and his confidence. I could feel his excitement. Comment by rone welles on 01/23/11 thank you for a good story..... Comment by Lorelei on 09/12/08 Yes, I'm very well acquainted with the Jersey Shore, having visited Asbury Park, Keansburg, Spring Lake, Belmar, Point Pleasant, Seaside Heights, Long Beach Island, Atlantic City, Wildwood, and Cape May with fair regularity in the 60s and 70s. I know exactly the atmosphere. Just wish I could've done it as a lovely teen girl with long hair, big floppy hat, mini-sundress, strappy shoes, and the sweetest, laciest underdainties. Pantsless legs caressed by ocean breezes. Comment by juliej on 05/13/07 the stories are both very gentle and interesting its amazing how devious girls can get more please Comment by juliej on 05/23/06 this is so far a great story i would love to read that in the beach bag the girls had put more girls clothes in it i wish it was me Comment by stevie on 03/05/06 aaah ! love this story. More like it please !! Comment by Matthew on 02/27/06 Enjoying the story so far can,t wait to complete reading the story . Comment by Dick Dunham on 02/27/06 Loved your story. Keep it going please |
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