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Bobbie's Story
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Comment by David on 01/25/13
These are awesome! What great pohtos of a beautiful couple. They look like SO much fun. You can tell you guys spent the whole shoot just laughing and goofing off. The first shot is my absolute fave! Comment by Frank on 01/06/13 These are awesome! What great phoots of a beautiful couple. They look like SO much fun. You can tell you guys spent the whole shoot just laughing and goofing off. The first shot is my absolute fave! Comment by Edik Chudinov on 04/10/09 A wonderful story, I was captivated and read it all in one burst. You really managed to convey a realistic feeling with all the scenes, and there were only a few areas where my immersion was broken. Comment by trying to understand on 03/12/09 I want to try and say this as kindly as I can. I think your writing ability is great. The first half of this story was captivating even though Bobby(ie's) Aunt Mary was disturbed by her loss of her real daughter. Turning an 8 year old boy into a girl for her own pleasure was selfish and cruel. However, in the mist of this there was a good story line with Laura and the other girls and school. I personally have a tender heart for all people and I was disturbed with the "dark" side of this involving "Mike" and others and what they did to sweet Bobby. I was pleased to see that Bobby got home safely and returned to a "normal" life. Wondering what long term effects his being abused would have on him/her. Again, you do have a great writing ability and I would like to see more stories without the "dark" side of life. Comment by stephen on 12/05/08 another great story from you. i only found out a couple of mistakes. keep up the great work Comment by juliej on 07/08/07 a brilliant story well done i enjoyed this a lot its the first time i have read it through its hard going but so far brilliant as your others that i have read sofar Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 12/18/04 This is a GREAT story! Two comments, though: Comment by Diane Sutton on 04/15/01 This story another fine one by one of the premier writers on this site is one I will remember for a long time. Jacki, has the ability to keep the reader spellbound, by giving very good descriptive details with a way of constructing her story that I wish I could emulate. The way she brings a small boy to adult hood is just what it should be with a story plot like she has written. I thourghly enjoyed the trials, and tribulations, that her main character, had to endure. And the final outcome of her transformation into a beautiful girl was well worth the time I took to read it. Jacki is one of the top 4 authors I would not have trouble reading without going anywhere else. Just keep writing Jacki. Comment by Francesca Barrie on 04/09/01 I think you are a very good story teller. This one had it all TGism, romance, pathos, menace etc.. All that and a happy ending. I loved it Thank you |
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