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Bobbies' Vacation
by Robert

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Comment by Dwyn on 01/02/19
This is a lovely and exciting story made more so for not be full of graphic sex.  I remembered  times when I, as a pre-teen and early teen, wore the undies and such of my mother and a cousin.  Ah, such a warm and, yes, sexy memory, yet no sex really happened.  

I thank you for a delightfully sexy and proper story.

On to the next  one!

Dwyn


Comment by Debilyn on 12/06/08
Hotels?  Well, anyway...The comments of "Bobbie" re "girls feeling half-dressed in a skirt" and "a thin piece of cotton separating you from the world" prove a point.  It's grossly unfair to refer to females as "the weaker sex".  Pregnancy and childbirth are NOT for weaklings.  And, to me, it takes enormous courage to be willing to appear in public with legs fully exposed and devoid of fabric, with wind and other weather elements directly hitting your underpants, cotton or softer.  (Shorts simply can't give you the same effect.)  Yet...it's a gal thing. Gals are allowed to do it. Some gals do it frequently, and think nothing of it, so secure are they in their femininity.

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Comment by Robin Diaz on 07/04/05
I enjoyed the story. I like how the girls are toying wih him.



Comment by Nicola on 06/20/05
Great Story hope to read more

Comment by Jennifer Brock on 06/19/05
That was a cute little story, illustrating how cruel teenage girls in groups can be, unless they knew that he was really enjoying it.
I hope the rest of her vacation goes well.

(Minor complaint: a beret is a hat; a barrette is a hair clip)

Comment by Debbie's Toy on 06/03/05
Very nice story.  I like G-rated stories.  The X rated stuff seems so crude.  I look forward to reading Bobbie on the Boardwalk.

Comment by Toni-Lynn (aka Training Bra Boy) on 05/14/05
Loved the story, especially the fact that you wore a training bra and and that it was a Teen Charm .. my favourite brand and a brand that I too owned at that age. I hope that this is the start of a trend toward more training bra stories!

Training bras rock!



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