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Bob and Carol and Gemma and Alice?
by Bethany Jacques

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Comment by ashley on 05/30/12
always a good one when one is down a bit and wanting!!

Comment by Silvia. on 12/28/10
Sorry Bethany. I didn't like this story.
Silvia.

Comment by ashley on 09/02/10
just had to read this again. Lovely

Comment by ashley on 09/25/09
My word this is a great yarn. Loved it and hope the continuation is in the works.

Comment by TinaTVuk on 11/08/01
Phew; I wonder if there's a couple out there that would do that to me and mine; oh such a fantasy to have help in dressing, to go out, to be treated as a woman .. but in front of partners an offer like that.
I still can't get over it, so you did wonderfully well to set the scene and create the illusion...almost broken when Bob kept forgetting my name if I'm allowed any mild criticism ..but even so another great offering.

Cheers Tina

Comment by Wendy Irene Gray on 11/07/01
Another great story,here's waiting for the next.



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