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The Body Suit
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mariah on 05/25/13
Good story, great effort to trap the rape teacher with a quite suitable reward for the ending.

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 02/08/09
A lovely story, I loved it!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/22/07
Well, in this story, you finally visit the "SPELLS'R'US realm. Janet, you can do the fantasy story as well as anybody here. In "ICON" you gave the lady her true love. In "THE MASTER'S" , the lady faces great evil, then lives a life of love. Too bad "BODYSUIT" does not have the same kind of happy ending.  Still, a sweet story, Be proud of your skills, Janet. YOU CAN WRITE!!!!

Comment by John Omohundro on 02/17/05
While the story was excellent otherwise, I find myself agreeing with Jezzi.

The ending *WAS* a bit rushed, and didn't seem to fit with the rest of the story.

Aside from that, though, I only found two flaws.

The first was a minor one--"Laura" 's original (i.e., male) first name was never mentioned.

The second one was a minor error from an anatomical standpoint--the line about "...blood running from my skull...", or some such. (I'm afraid that I don't recall the exact quote.)

Simply put, bone *DOESN'T* bleed. I think what Janet meant to say was "...blood running from my *SCALP*...". (Emphasis mine.)

Again, the only criticism intended is CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.

Comment by Dominique on 10/04/04
What a great story!!! For a man like me who use to, in my teen years, dreamed to be a girl, ant for that let his immagination create stories where I was obliged to become a girl.

Comment by Andrea Foster on 02/18/03
This is an interesting offering, with a distinctly sharper edge than is usual from this author. I thought it worked well, and I certainly enjoyed the story, at least until if veered off into the magical weeds. I must admit that I found the transition from a fairly realistic approach to something more like an SRU story a bit jarring.

Best wishes, Andrea.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 02/18/03
Wow, Janet,  I can't remember another story of yours where magic was used.  I figured from the beginning that he'd want to stay a girl and was trying to figure out how you'd get him from the suit to hormones to SRS.  

I think you do better without magic; the use of magic just said to me that you must have thought, "I'm tired of this story, so I'll just throw in magic to end it quickly."

Comment by Just Me on 02/18/03
Cute and very short for a Janet story.  Loved it!  Keep up the good work.

Comment by Paula on 02/17/03
truely a sweet tale and a surprise ending I never expected to happen



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