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Bonnie Jeanne: A Day at the Beach
by Janis Elizabeth

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Comment by chrisl on 12/31/02
I really enjoyed this story as well as the other three posted here.
Nice and gentle stories like this make me yearn for my current understanding to have been there during my youth, alas this never happened for me. Thank you for a pleasant sojourn in the land of dreams. Please write again and I hope you enjoy the happiness you have given.
Hugs, Chrisl
Comment by Priscilla Collins on 12/30/02
Janis,
I just love your stories about Bonnie Jeanne. They are told with such sympathy that I can feel young Brendan nervously but steadily emerging into the pretty sweet young girl he and his mother want him to be. I have just read the latest, their visit to the beach, and I was delighted with the empathy shown by his cousin. This will make his change to girlhood so much easier, now he has a girlfriend who encourages him.
And joy of joys! I find that he has been dressed in plastic raincoats, my favourite garment of all time. I felt so jealous of them putting them on for the first time, and then oh heaven falling asleep in them with the hoods up. Pity there are no pics!!! Please please please, Janis, have them in the rain often; the girls and their mothers obviously love the feel look and scent of these lovely femme garments, so please indulge them and me.

Hugs,

Priscilla (waiting for the next!!!)
Comment by Annie O on 12/30/02
A small thanks for your stories! They brought me back to my own sense of worth in a very cruel world.


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