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Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 10/19/02
So since they won't remember their previous lives, The Wizard once again has committed murder.  It would have been a bit different if he'd have told them they would vanish, and they agreed knowing the full consequences.

Comment by Paula on 10/19/02
enjoyed Pt 2 as much as part 1.  Though at the end of part 2 it mention not remembering old life. I prefer the characters rememebering they were once male.

Comment by tina on 10/19/02
about ep.2

Fantastic (it'#s not that often we get a sequal to a spells r us :). However, 6 inch difference between the full bust and the under bust is a B cup :) (take measurment under the bust, add four if it's even, or five if it's odd, this gives you the strap size,, then measure the bust. If the bust is the same size as the strap, it's an A cup, one inch more is a B, and so on:)

take care

Comment by Mr. Ram on 08/30/02
I too thought that Sam's punishment should have been different from the others. Other than that, it was a cute short story.

Comment by Vampyre on 08/29/02
Excellent story. I really enjoyed the idea. This was the first STU story i had read and I think now I'll have to read a whole lot more. If you have any plans for a follow up I'd be more than happy (Hint Hint)

Comment by just bob on 08/29/02
I like sru stories.  I would have rathered Sam be male again because of the way he approched the wizard, and had Red and the other boy be girls and Sam's girl friends.  but the story was real good; I agree with all of the above

Comment by MonaR on 08/29/02
Bravo.  Very well done, particularly because this is your first story.  If this is a measure of what's to come, I'm anxiously waiting.  The ending was a tad abrupt but I assume that's another story.

Mona

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Comment by lisa on 08/29/02
great story. I wonder how this would work with some simple ilistrations :) (Also it would be cool if the 'boys' forced him to chew three whole packs of gum and his breasts became bigger than he was, but that's just me being weird;)

Comment by donna on 08/29/02
great story, you have real talent, one thing though, I think F cup breasts would be more like water melons than coconuts (that's more a C cup I think:)

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 08/29/02
I liked this SRU story up to the end.  I think the end would have worked much better with them just becoming girls physically and then having to deal with that and decide whether to do what the Wizard said or not.  How will they learn a lesson if they don't know who they were?  Why did the Wizard say he'd be watching them to see if they carried out their part of the bargain when he knew they would because the new girls they had become wanted to go on the dates?  Also, Sam DID pay for the gum, and I think there should be a difference between the punishment he gets and Red and Dick's.

Comment by Shawn on 08/29/02
Fun story, hope there is another part

Comment by Paula Jutras on 08/28/02
a cute unexpected SRU type story with the wizard and all. Really enjoyed the ending.



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