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Booby Trap
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Comment by Curioso on 03/05/20
He will be the new doll of his wife. Comment by Aleesha on 07/29/10 Yes I know this is a story but I could not possibily believe that Monica could have been so cruel and devious. On the other hand if my wife did that to me I would be in heavan. Thanks. Comment by Leelee on 07/29/08 Again my kind of story having gone through the breast cream segment with my secretary I related to that the only thing that bothered me was the speed only in fiction can such a transformation happen no matter how much we want it to be real...but in fiction we can read ourselvess into the story and have that tingly expression in our swollen cocks as we vicariously relate to the transformation Well written and cute and sexy story...now what will happen to Leanni? Comment by juliej on 04/27/08 brilliant 3 reading more please stories are great Comment by juliej on 07/24/07 brilliant story welldone my 2nd time reading this its amazing what can be done with creams&powderes neatly caught hook' line &sinker Comment by JULIEJ on 03/04/06 i LOVE THE STORY A FEW SPELLING MISTAKES BUT BRILLIANT WHAT A WAY TO GO HE WALKED INTO THE TRAP ALL ON HIS OWN HOW DEVIOUS CAN THE FEMALE MIND GET,I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE ON THIS STORY THINGS LIKE HOW HE GETS TURNED INTO A MAID SEPERATE BEDROOMS HOW HIS MATES REACT TO HIM WHAT A WAY TO GO BRILLIANT STORY MORE PLEASE Comment by SassySue on 08/08/05 Thank you Ms. White for being such a frequent contributor of enjoyable, well written tales like this one to Storysite. |
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