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Comment by Sheryl S. on 04/02/04
This one is a special treat for me as I grew up in Bayside, Queens. The atmosphere of the salon is down pat. "Kitty" is so perfectly evocative of the era. Rhonda was a very nice supporting character, and Ken was well written also. Congratulations on a truly terrific story that touched me quite a bit personally. Comment by Andrea Foster on 03/31/04 A very good debut. The story is well written, and has a nice tone and atmosphere. The plot is very believable and the conflicting feelings of Barry/Kitty had the ring of truth. Most enjoyable. Comment by Slothrop on 03/30/04 The attraction to crossdressing translates to the attraction to men rather suddenly, without any foreshadowing. I can only assume it was there all along and that was the intent, since it does not seem real if a 'few drinks and free blowjobs' is the magic homosexual conversion formula. Comment by Vickie on 03/30/04 A wonderful blending of wish fulfillment, or a wish fulfilled, with odd, recalcitrant, unpredictable details of the reality we in fact inhabit, and the mood of apprehension and a tentative, uncertain gratification, well-sustained. Barry seems unsure by the end where he'll be going (or Kitty will be going), and he has Mom yet to cope with, but he had wanted that first whole experience and he got it, and the story allows us to share it. Thank you. Comment by riottgrrl on 03/30/04 Hi, Comment by Darlene T. on 03/30/04 Yes, where? I can barely wait to see. Excellent, honey don't stop! Comment by chrisl on 03/30/04 Hi Tanya, Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/30/04 CONGRATULATIONS! This is probably the most realistic TG fiction story I've read, certainly not a fantasy, but like the real thing might be! The two beauticians were professional, but were not all giddy to dress him up or sadistic to humiliate him. He had practiced, so his passing was not a stretch. The blow job was a bit much, but still within the realm of possibility with Kitty in charge because of the alcohol. Good job! |
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