I have read this story before and am reading it again. Like the characters and the story flow. The only criticism ( if you wnat to call it that) is that this story could easily be broken down into three or four stories. I especially liked the first part about the weight loss and incentatives it shows that two people can really care about their spouses, glad to see that.

Dylan looks happy getting all that food. He is such a good eater, you are lucky Beth. I am glad you guys had a good day with your Grandpa, dad and Brandy. I miss and love you guys. xxoxoo

No more s***. All posts of this quliaty from now on

Good to see a talnet at work. I can't match that.

Brandy, you really wrote a bad story.
They were a happy couple, but she screwed everything!
He did what she wanted, because he loved her.
I didn't like the story.
Silvia.

Honey,  you deserve lots more encouragement than you've had.  The raders who have commented re right - there should be more words to tell you how well you write....... keep going,  please!
LOL WbG xxx

BRANDY, I CAN'T HELP BUT THINK THIS IS YOUR STORY. I CRIED FOR BRANDY WHEN SHE WAS RAPED. I WANT TO TAKE THAT PAIN AWAY FROM YOU IF I CAN IF THIS IS TRULY YOUR STORY, I WILL HOLD YOU AS A DEAR FRIEND, FOR WE HAVE CORRESPONDED ON THE SEASONS HOUSE SAGA. AND I GIVE YOU MY WORD BRANDY THAT ANY STORY IDEAS CONCERNING ANY OF YOURS OR TIGGERS WORKS I WILL SEND TO YOU FOR YOUR APPROVAL I SAY SO HERE FOR EVIDENCE.

Brandy - this is a fun story with excellent mechanics. I'm shocked at the small number of readers given the much larger numbers for stories that aren't a fraction as good.

Thank you for writing this.

Jill

Excellant story, Once I started rreading it I had to come back everyday for the next chapter

I found the story thoroughly entertaining and liked the essentially escapist nature of the whole piece. Why not have everyone living happily ever after, after all there is enough doom and gloom in the world. Thanks for the entertainment.

Because of run on stories & incomplete stories I tend to avoid serials until they are completed. This story is an exception. While I tend to skim some of the more drawn out intercourse scenes: I really enjoy the story line & the evolution of the characters. This is an overdue thank you .

Another Brian

Hi, Glad to see your post another story here, like i said before i like the way you write and read all of your work, it´s a little darker that the others but still a great job

A complaint.

I have up to now Enjoyed this story. It is rather more explicit than I normaly like but the well writen style has kept my atention.

However. I DONT read RAPE stories.

When I read a rape it boils my blood and makes me want to start breaking things. Thats why I dont read them. I dont like sitting at my computer shaking in thinly controlled rage.

If you are going to include a rape scene, PUT A DAMN WARNING UP!

I am fairly pissed at you right now. Please go add a warning to that file as I am far from the only preson who chooses NOT to read rape scenes.

The Scotsman

so what happens next in 19 & 20 and so on in Bosom Bondage Buddies

I just wanted to add my thanks to Brandy for posting this story here (even if in dribs and drabs as some have complained) and in order that Ami Lamida's comments would not be the first that one saw.  I whole-heartedly agree with Kelly Ann Rogers' review.  This story is certainly a very well written story that will push a lot of buttons for many heterosexual cross-dressers.  What's not to like with a loving and cooperative wife, glamorous clothes, lesbian action, mild bondage by both partners and lot's of good, well-written sex scenes.  

While Ami is correct that this is a sweet story with Randall and Kelly being like "the Donny and Marie of bondage and cross-dressing", I'd hardly call the dialog "saccarine-sweet" as Ami does.  And while "life is rarely as naive as this type of story makes it seem", we can certainly hope that our own lives would be as smooth and wonderful.  This is fiction after all.

Keep up the great work Brandy!

SS

Having lost my patience to wait and see if the story got any better, I went to your website to read ahead.  Unfortunately, I even lost patience with the remaining twenty-some-odd chapters.

If you're in the Sweet/Sentimental crowd (as most here seem to be), you can very safely ignore the "bondage" label on this story and dive right in.  You will probably enjoy the story immensely.  But if you are looking for something a little more realistic, you might try looking elsewhere.

While Brandy's writing is impeccable, the characters of Randall and Kelly are like the Donny and Marie of bondage and cross-dressing.  Life is rarely as naive as this type of story makes it seem.  The saccarine-sweet dialog leaves me cold.

Of course, all this is personal opinion based on personal preference, and is by no means an indictment on the quality of Brandy's writing.  I have to admit that Brandy is one of the better writers in the community.

-Ami

I am so happy to see this story posted again. I lost my copy to a hard drive crash.  I is such a good fun story and I can't wait for the next one to be posted.  

Thanks again.

Hey Girls and Boys!  This is a terrific story!  It's fun, witty, thoughtful, warm, rich, very sexy, realistic, and best of all well written.  Brandy DeWinter is one of our best writers, and if you have't read any of her work, this is a great place to start.  Even this, her first story shows all the talent that would become even more evident later on.      

ARG!  write longer parts please.  this was great to whet the appetite but I get frustrated with people who continually post in 10K fragments because it makes it harder to get into the story when every page and a half you have to wait for the next installment.

YAYY!!!!

A pleasure to remember my first introduction to this truly great author!

Just plain fun, even in the dark spots.  If you haven't read this story, and you like a touch of kink that warms like. . .like, well, like that first sip of brandy, get ready to have a grrrrreat time! and if you think you DON'T like that in a story? Try reading this one anyway - you might be very pleasently surprised.

Warm furries

Tigger

i like to read ahole story not just the first part