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Bowling Night
by Ray Kitten

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Comment by Rosie on 07/13/12
Loved this story - very envious of Scott.

Comment by Silvia. on 09/16/11
Congratulations!
Very good tale!
Hugs.
Silvia.

Comment by Kelly Ann Rogers on 02/17/04
A perfectly realized, hot little gem. Bravo.

Comment by Sissi Riki on 02/17/04
Your writing is so eloquent and flowing. I'm like getting into the story and my ultimate fantasy is to lose a bet and beforced to be a french maid and this story you have to score highest to be a french maid,which is fine with me, but it ends so abruptly that it left me totally frustrated, your such a tease. Maybe if we're lucky there will be a part 2 with a heavy dose of french maid in it! Sissi Riki

Comment by sarah acklin on 02/16/04
A cool twist at the end. Very funny.



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