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The Boy
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Comment by Mariah on 05/02/13
Nice story...when you find yourself in comfort, that's where you always belonged! Comment by Jamie Elizabeth on 07/02/10 Well told Janet! I have followed your stories for years and this is the 1st I've seen that focussed on helping someone else. This is how you find yourself; to give yourself away. It is the ultimate deed to help someone find an easier path in life. CG Jung said (I think) that we search for meaning in life and this is an excellent way to do it. Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/25/08 ARE YOU TELLING ME THIS IS BASED ON A REAL INCIDENT? AND IT MAY HAVE BEEN A BOY? WELL THEN MORE POWER TO THE BOY. I WISH SOME ONE DID THAT TO ME WHEN I WAS A KID, THEN I WAS GOOD LOOKING AND LOOKED BETTER THAN MY SISTER BUT MY MOTHER WOULD NOT OF LET IT AND MY FATHER THE FOREIGN MORON WOULD OF BLOWN A FUSE AND BEAT ME, HE HAD NO BRAINS. BUT I WISH SOME ONE DID TURN ME BECAUSE THAT IS WHAT I WANTED TO BE NOW AS I KEEP SAYING IT IS TOO LATE, IF THEY DID IT BACK THEN AND MAYBE AFTER A WHILE IF I HAD A COUNSELOR ON THIS ISSUE SHE WOULD OF GOTTEN RID OF THE MORON AND SENT MY SISTER AWAY BECAUSE SHE USED THE SYSTEM WITH HER HUSBAND TO MURDER OUR MOTHER AND OUR DOG AND SHE DOES WHAT HER HUSBAND SAYS, SHE IS HIS SLAVE NOW. Comment by rone welles on 02/19/08 Its a girl ..... he always was a girl mom could see that but dad could not , and yet .... Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/21/07 Very cute story. Here, a young man discovers he wants to be a girl. he is given advice and his parents accept the new girl. Yes, I saw you in the story giving advice. Comment by Lisa Skye on 02/09/03 This is such a cute story! I know I've read it before but I still love it. Mainly beacuase I wish it had happened to me! Comment by Josea on 12/02/02 A cute little story. I am please to see some improvement in the way you tell a story. |
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