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The Boy Bride
by Belinda Bee

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Comment by Amanda on 08/22/13
I like the stories that the main character loses all control. Sometimes a step at a time. Piercings, permanent makeup, name change, power of attorney, contract, lockable dress, undetected bondage. Lots of silk and satin, and scarves. I like the neighbor's surprise in your other story. Good job!

Comment by this is me on 09/17/12
Oh Please! It doesn't lose its ardour because of their actions. I suspect that additional parts will/would ruin the outcome of what to me is a fantastic beginning. Everyone gets what they want in this story. You can't improve on perfection.

Comment by Davina on 05/01/12
How could any of us dislike this story?  It gave me the loveliest feeling as I lived Jamie's ecstasy.  'If only my mummy had dressed me like Jamie', I kept thinking, my life would have been perfect.  Instead
of having to 'borrow' her undies when she was at work I would have been delighted to have her encourage my femininity, and as for wearing a wedding dress that was the ultimate!  Thank you Belinda, I've kept 'Boy Bride' and will no doubt re-read it many times.

Comment by Silvia. on 11/06/10
Bad story!
I hate this thing called mistress, and dominant wife!
Disgusting.

Comment by patty on 01/26/10
a story which we would all love to live

Comment by Sharon on 12/12/09
This is my favorite story i read it over and over.

Comment by Sharon on 11/02/09
That was such a beautiful story,It is every cressdressers dream to
be a beautiful bride,

Comment by Stefan on 07/13/08
What a sweet story. I think every boy bride would wish for a wedding day like this! Wouldn't they??

Comment by jillieuk on 07/20/07
please update this lovely story

Comment by Rone welles on 06/05/07
 Well done and fun to dream about what IT would be like ...
five star rating *****   go girl go..more please
thank you thank you Rone Welles.  ;)

Comment by Fancy Nancy on 05/20/07
No disgrace whatsoever in Janie "messing" her little bridal panties on her wedding day with sudden gushings, as long as it relieved sexual tension and produced tranquility. No need for tears and embarrassment. If it was a problem,I think she should've worn a nice diaper in her nuptial dainties.  Feminine wetness is nothing to be ashamed of; I would've loved to have been in her place.

Comment by juliej on 05/12/07
an intersting reflection of jamies life this can continue with a lot more detail and how his wife took over

Comment by Berta on 04/15/06
Very well written story. It is so rare to read stories such as this that are uplifting and promising to those who have the deep feelings of both genders without shame or derogatory language.

Brought back fond memories of my youth when I'd slip into my mom's wedding gown some days after school and luxuriate in all that lovely bridal satin for a few hours!

Comment by christi on 04/12/06
I do hope you do more of this story  I would like to read about the new wife, and her new life, maybe s/he could become a young mother ?
love Christi

Comment by juliej on 04/07/06
this story could continue with life after mariege whether his wife became the domminant one

Comment by sissy wife on 04/05/06
a very good story .... i like the theme very much
please continue

hugs

Comment by Sissy Phyll on 03/23/06
What a lovely story it was so wonderful.  What a great time for the new special girl to find herself in and she did love the entire time and events as they progressed.  How could she not , oh how i wanted to be the special girl it was happen ing to.  Maybe someday my dream can come true.  Keep up the stories we love to read..  Love and kisses xoxoxoxo Sissy Phyll

Comment by Lisa Skye on 03/23/06
A lovely story! This is the kind of story I really like to read - nobody being mean and the CD gets the GG.

Comment by (AJ) Eric on 03/23/06
Well, sweet/sentimental until the end, when his mother, new spouse and attendants conspired to make sure Jamie's big day (and probably the rest of her life) would be as humiliating as they could make it without clueing anyone else in on the situation.

Competently written and well paced, but my enjoyment was spoiled completely by the epilogue.  Only continuation that would interest me would be Jamie taking her hotshot lawyer spouse to court, annulling the marriage and either getting awarded punitive damages or seeing Melissa fly off the handle and get jailed for contempt of court.

Eric



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