A delightful story,  beautifully written.

lovely story and so full of feminine longing please write more.

Gillian's story is ever so delicious, but it's such a shame, of course, that puberty has to set in and destroy those characteristics that permit pre-teen boys and girls to frequently masquerade as each other so easily, which, carefully supervised, can be such wonderful fun.  Sometimes, it seems, all that's necessary to turn a pre-teen boy into a pre-teen girl is long hair, panties, and skirt.

The ice-skating descriptions give me an idea for a story, which I hope someone will create someday, about a teen boy who has to substitute for a teen girl at an ice show.  There would be detailed descriptions of his preparations concerning hair, nails, jewelry, etc., but especially of the outfit, which would be so incomparably girly that he would have to take special anti-wetness precautions by means of protection in his pretty little panty against the inevitable involuntary result of Femininity kicking in.  The realization that the arms and shoulders are exposed and the lower limbs lack the "security" of pants.  And he wouldn't have it any other way.  Elaine B was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO right!

 Well done timeless  and a fun story   we should all have such a good experience ....   thank you for your talent and writing for us .
***** star rating   Rone

   Loved the entrancement and realistic reactions and confusions. Also that Gillian was playing the field, so to speak, was indicative of a confused youngster. I do feel that there is a tremendous amount left out, but yet again the story did not get away from you and did come to a finish.

  Excellent choice on a first hand point of view. That allowed for convincing maleable emotional states that are crucial with so many changes and confusing messages. Gillian was trying to figure everything out on the run and really didn't have much of a clue. Sounds like it could have gone much, much further. But it does sound as if it is based in part on your life.

   Very good and entertaining story.

   Hugs,

   Kristi  

The skating accounts reminded me of a TV talk show I saw awhile back in which a sad, deluded girl figure skater with short hair and masculine clothing explained why she was going to spend the rest of her life as a  male (including her skating career); one reason she gave was "pants are so much more comfortable than tights and short dresses".  The female host scolded her for her decision, saying, "Why? You've got legs most girls would die for!"  The story points up the foolishness of that girl; why would any female want to abandon the irreplaceable sensation of swish-swish tights and a teeny, gossamer, swirly skirt around her thighs?  Also, I was so thrilled by the thought of Gillian riding a bike saddle directly on his/her panties, with the risk of wind exposure.  No male sensation can equal that.  Never heard of a girl actually doing it, though.  Wish I could!

Hi Gillian,  what a wonderful story, and what wonderful experiences you must have had.  You tell the story so well and truly capture the feelings we girl-boys have when we can be so sissy and feminine, and girly.  It is truly the most wonderful feeling in the entire world, isn't it?  Yes, you know exactly how to express the wonder and excitement of being a girl, nothing else even comes close to the thrills and euphoria when we can be our true selves!  Can't wait to read the rest of your tale.  Please don't keep us guessing.  Love, Elaine

Looking forward to the next big event in Gillian's life.

I will be especially interested in how the Brian aspect is handled.

Waiting patiently.

Gillian dear, you really are a clever girl. This is absolutely super and I do hope you will continue. I can just picture you in your angel costume esp. the white satin panties and ballet shoes!

I guess there is something drastically wrong with me! I prefer females, whether I'm dressed or not. The male body is just so unappealling to me.
 Bye the bye, are you a Kiwi?

Enjoyed reading your story when does conclude?

Nicely told.  Artistic.  I hope to enjoy more.

A darling little pre-teen story the more moving because it is based on fact.  I have a fact based pre-teen story too but it didn't end well.  How about yours?  

Congratulations Gillian - I love your story. You must develop this much further and tell us about your weekend as Gillian. All my love Angela

Dear Gillian!

Surely all we girls will be waiting for further details with barely bated breath (whatever that means exactly). A girl friend, a boy friend, and a whole orchestra of girls.

Whee! Whatever came next had to be interesting. Enjoyed the natural narrative style.