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Boyfriend to Bride
by Ms Kathy

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Comment by slavetoby on 10/13/10
This is a really good story and i enjoyed the entire thing. Please keep it up as i am looking forward as to what happens next

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 01/06/09
Very well done, Ms. Kathy. You and Ms. Martha certainly put sissy billie in the right frame of mind and the perfect feminine attire. Your rules for sissy billie are spot on, especially the last one. Of course, more rules could and should be added as sissy billie's training continues. Well done, indeed!

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 03/27/08
As I stated previously,I can't wait to see what Ms. Kathy and Ms. Martha have in store for sissy billie. It would be a shame to let this great beginning go to waste. As a side note, Ms. Kathy, my Mistress instructed me to tell you that your rules are right on the mark.  

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 01/24/08
My goodness; what's next for sissy billie? Please get back to this story; it is a winner

Comment by juliej on 01/12/08
as per previous comments

Comment by juliej on 08/07/05
part 2 is very good but short i look forewards to the next part thankyou

Comment by julie j on 10/16/04
a very good start to the story more work needed a lot of spelling mistakes this story can be taken to the very limit welldone so far more please

Comment by cojack5 on 02/12/04
Dear Crystal/Ms Kathy, just a thank you for 10 minutes of heaven.
I hope I have these opportunities in the next world (oh, that sounds
like whining).

Comment by Sissy Slut on 07/06/03
Great story! Reminds me of the outingings I have had with my Mistress Jenna. The only thing different is that after shopping she takes me to sleazy bars and makes me find a big juicy cock to savor. Her family knows of my submissiveness and loves to humiliate me as I serve them. Keep up the good work!

Comment by SassySue on 07/05/02
Good story.  I especially enjoyed the action at the end of part 2.  I hate stories that don't let the transformee have some relief too.  Keep up the good work.  I look forward to reading more episodes.

SS

Comment by SatinUKCD on 06/21/02
Sorry but I found this a very sad story and not at all nice reading

Comment by Sissy_aimee on 06/20/02
Very readable and well-written. The outfit is great for everyday sissy wearing. Losing his men clothing piece by piece is interesting, too. You could have written more about the process.

Comment by Ms G. W. on 06/19/02
This is a wonderful start. Please, Please, finish this one. You
have all the elements that in there that some of the top authors
on this site (example: A Happy Wife) use.

Comment by Priscilla Gay Bouffant on 06/17/02
You could have spent much more time and effort on the salon scene alone. This did not do much for me. Priss

Comment by Rose on 06/16/02
Great effort and a good story line. Looking forward to the next part.

Comment by suzielynn on 06/16/02
you did a very good job on your story Ms.Kathy. i enjoyed it very much & hope you do some more like this.



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