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That really was a nice story. I am greatly pleased to see an indian story.as sindhu has already said you should help us by letting us know few other stories like yours. I am interested in this kind of stuff because my brother was caught by me while cross dressing in my room and he wanted me to make him up like a girl. i have felt very happy because i always love to dress someone.so after this incident i forced my boyfriend to wear my saree and he looked gorgeous in it and even he too liked it and he himself asks me now and then to cross dress him.now i have both a boyfriend and a girlfriend.i brought her a bra,petticoat,a blouse and a beautifut red colour half saree which he told he wears it when alone in his house. So please sri lakshmi i want to know as many indian stories of cross dressing as possible with the help of your website. Hope you will respond quickly to my request    

It was a really good story.but i am really dying to know stories of  this kind.please do make a note of other stories you know in your website.i am very curious of things like a boy being caught dressed like his girlfriend or wife.....but remember i only like indian stories

hi,very nice story. its really makes me happy to find indian stories on net. plz post more stories to read.

hi
its really makes me happy to find indian stories on net
one day we will definately make a big community over the net
so till then enjoy being the true girl from inside
bye

the reason why i jumped to the automatic translation theory was because it seems rather similar to what some of the better translation programs can produce. for example google translator will out put text smiler to this in English from a target source . i.e. really choppy English but at the same time maintain some sense of meaning in a rather convoluted way.

in any event like everyone has said it needs an editor since this is just mentally to taxing to read.

I have to agree with everyone here. The author is in real need of an editor. I have a friend who lives in Puerto Rico, and she doesn't speak English very well, but the editing program she uses, is very reliable, and her pieces comes out almost virtually error free. With a little tweaking, she is able to write a perfect English piece.

The author here however, needs to understand that it is hard to follow a story written the way this one is. Not only are there spelling and grammar errors, but there are word omissions as well. I also agree that if the author wants the help, there are many of us who will help, and ask nothing in return.

Sreelakshmi, this story does have potential, and the plot is good, but it is just the spelling, grammar, and word omissions that need editing, to make this story flow. Please, if you don't speak English well, ask one of us for help, and we will gladly help you.

Love & hugs,
Barbara

It's true.  English is one of the more difficult languages to learn, especially if it isn't a person's native tongue.  So, I agree with Leah that the author should get an editor that can help out for the more difficult parts of English writing.  That is, of course, if Sreelakshmi wants the help.

Imagine #1: yourself knowing a little English, actually quite a lot but not nearly as much as someone born and raised in an English-language culture. Imagine #2: that you have recently discovered StorySite (and maybe FM and Big Closet to boot!) and want desperately to participate with your own biography or invented story.

What Sreelakshmi, our author, needs is an editor - someone to smoothe out the English and ask for intentions of meaning where that is not clear. I'm pretty sure that if Sreelakshmi contacts StorySite, whoever responds will be able to suggest appropriate assistance.

I cannot imagine that an online translator (program, not person) could do nearly as well as Sreelakshmi has done in telling the story. People who know but one language often fail to understand what obstacles and challenges are encountered in writing an original piece in a second or third language. A great example that rarely fails to remind us of how complex languages are is the experience of reading a comic book in other than your native language. The vocabulary (especially the slang) is amazing!

I have to agree with hmmm.  This story definitely appears to have been put through a translator.  There could be several explanations.  a. The author barely speaks English and can't write properly.  b. The author can't speak English at all and put it through a translator.  or c.  The author actually stole this from a foreign site and translated it, passing it off as his own.  All of these are possibilities.

this is completely unreliable. its like it was written in another language then thrown though some online translator