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I really don't know what to say.  I think though that if I had been Ashley I would have killed myself while recieving so much verbal abuse and feeling so guilty of raping somone!

I find it hard to believe that anyone would put up with that much verbal abuse but I guess it could happen, maybe.
I did read the whole story and am glad that it turned out well in the end. Well as can be anyway.

To put it short and sweet, I was bored silly and did not feel like looking for another story.

Great story - long enough to be convincing

I stopped reading this story. It's very bad.
I'm sorry.
Silvia.

I loved the story.  Didn't care for Ashley being made into a baby, but the rest of the story was good.   You made the reader become Ashleys friend which gets them into the story.  You have a good talent-- keep it up.  Best wishes    Jolene

way too much emotional abuse, even for something as insidious as rape. And after Ashley got raped, their reactions were pretty thin in comparison, I was hoping for more focus on her trying to rebuild herself.

Not to mention the way she let herself open back up to them after so much abuse is...unrealistic, even for fiction. She should've stayed paranoid of them for a long time, expecting the worst, or expecting betrayel, unless she's suffering from stockholm.

You started out so well with your description.
Amanda seemed sweet.
Then you lost it all and threw in so much degradation and abuse that I stopped reading you.
Why write this kind of rubbish?

You seem to be able to write a real story.
What made you think that this was one?
It's ugly, and sad too.
Those relations you are describing can only lead to suicide or killings.

Don't throw your talent away on such twisted dreams.
Try a story of redemption and hope instead.
There is a need for that, much more than there is for puking.

Yoron.

A real fantasy which is why it didn't do it for me; I prefer tales which are, at least, slightly believable. This story was remarkable in that none of the characters came across as real; the Guy's reaction to months of torture was silly; the pregnancy bit was weak to say the least, a women like that would have had an abortion, and the kidnapping was an unlikely risk taken by Sheila, someone who was an intimate of the mob.

I love the story very enjoyable

not much into force fem but it is well written especially the discriptions of what happened to the main character when awoken in bed.

I love forced fem stories and this one hit all my buttons: maid duties, restraints, humiliation, hormones, breast expansion, and best of all, lactation.  Also the story was well told, with mostly believable situations, interesting characters, and realistic dialogue.

CAUTION SPOILERS AHEAD

Dislikes: The main character seemed to fall into his little girl role a little too eagerly and I don't usually go for homosexual characters or storylines, but Tommy and his relationship with Ashley has to be the best I have ever read.  Also I thought the rape by Brent and Jared was overkill and I would have left Ashley with a functioning penis, so it could be part of the love-making with Amanda, but those are just my personal preferrences and don't detract from a truly well-written tale.  

I usually do not read many stories over 100k, but I am glad I saved this one to read when I had a few hours to myself.  There is really not much to add, except that I loved the story and the storytelling and recommend it highly to all.  

SS

Note on cyber board directed my attention to this story, I think read it first time around but comment system not in place. The story isn't a 10 but is decent with good writitng, good description and detail, and fairly good depth of character.

In the point it made was the person underneath is the important thing not the clothes.