I loved this story and I think you have inspired me to have a go. I was born a boy but I always knew I was a girl so it was a bit different from your story but when I read it I felt there were many moments I recognised and that gave me a nice feeling and made me feel good about myself. Growing up I didn't always feel that good about myself but at least I got to be the girl I  knew I was all along. I was secretly thrilled when he opted to stay as a girl because to me nothing beats being a girl.

A very nice story, but if anything had went wrong the coach would be the one in trouble for ever letting this arrangement occur after she knew the truth long before the event got out of hand.  Fortunately, That never happened so Rachel Jumped the fence to spend the rest of her life in happiness...as your readers have grown to expect, a happy ending.

This is the frist story by this author, Miss Janet L. Stickney, that I've read. It was very well written and each of the characters were nicely introduced. However, nothing was written about going on hormones or how to resolve Rachael's facial hair problem. Also, as with a lot of Transgender Stories, no mention is made about getting a, "trachea shave." Our, "Adam's Apples," do give us all away. [sigh]

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. This author's charm is, that she brings you (i.e.: me) into the story rather than just sitting on the side-lines. I almost felt, that I was part of the family, rather than an, "intruder," [a reader]

I'm my Mistress/Wife's Housemaid/husband. She controls me 100% There's many a day, that I wish I could, "flip a switch," and be a full-time girl/woman but I'd want to, "flip-back," when my grandchildren are with me. [Oh, well.] I shall be reading more of this author's stories.

"Missy," Susan Pauline

This is my favorite story by you. I love it. I wish there was another part. I just wanna know more about what happend. Well over all happy ending. I still cant get enough out of your stories.

Well Janet, Quite a story!!! Poor Adam, he becomes a cheerleader because he loves Valerie!! Then as Rachel, finds she likes being a girl. But does Rachel have the operation? Does Rachel stay as is? Ned to continue this story, if possible.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

  Ahh this is the way it should happen in the end ...the beginning was a little rough but end was the only outcome and it is well done ..
so much insight you have Janet and the compassion you show in your stories gives us a glimces for you mind ...

thank you for this  ....  XO Rone

I loved the story and wish it was not fiction. But that is what dreams are made of. Thanks

What can I say that I haven't said in prior comments about this authors ability? The story of a boy who tries to show his love for a cheerleader, and gets to become one himself? Great story, I liked the way his parents are pulled into the story, and have him, not only continue with his folly, that of being a cheerleader, but they make him obtain breast implants and other little things in order to continue with his desception of being a girl. At first I thought he would loose out at cheerleader camp without his girlfriend but I was mistaken and happily surprised with the results. Right off the bat this is the type of story that give those of us with imaginations, of this happening to us, a great tale to read. I enjoy these types of stories and I can't understand why others can't take the time to leave a comment for one of the most prolific and best writers on this site. Hey, wake up out there write something, anything. Authors enjoy hearing from you. Sorry I just had to say it.