GvPtoL Really enjoyed this article. Much obliged.

Dear Ms. Emma B,

I, too, would like you to spend some time to add more chapters to this Story of yours. You've done a good job, when you introduced each of the characters. I'm sure, that there are more to come.

The theme, although often used, is a good one. The story, "His Dress Uniform," was a good one.

There are so many possibilities for your developement of this, "Bad Boy," to, "Good Girl," theme.

It's been a while, since you've started. This type of Story has always, "excited," me.

I only had sisters. More than once, I let my Mom know, that to save some family money, I could go to school in my sisters' hand-me-downs. It never happened though, (sigh) My career days are over and I work two part-time jobs. I wear my Mary Janes all the time.

Sisterly yours,

Missy Susan

great a start but it needs the next part to get it going again

Poor Brad's been standing outside his school in his New School Uniform for 9 years - isn't it about time he went in?  Seriously, hurry up with the next part/s of this story - I'd  like to know what happens next.

Like all the other Readers' comments- very good story... PLEASE continue! Hugs and kisses, jeannette

Is there any chance of Part 2 (and more) appearing - after all, it's been 7 years!

a very good start to a story that needs to be continued well done

What a great start, I hope you will be able to finish this one it has excellent possibilities

Dear Emma

I was going thorugh the stories on the Story Site (www.storysite.org) and came accross your story entitled "Brad's New School Uniform".
I read through the story and found that, to my dismay, the story was incomplete and missing future parts of the story.

I emplore you to continue on with this lovely piece of literature and continue on with future stories

Yours

The Hearts Fire

Emma B. you are too good to quit; go ahead start writing again. You are good enough to do an installment every five years and still make it a great story.

My favorite kind of story, please try to go on with it.

a good start to what appears like its going to be a great story, its interseting how a girls clothes change bullies etc please get the second part done asap brilliant start thankyou

I like the story but as some of the other authors that do the same trick with leaving you hanging then putting a  To Be Continue? line with the question mark is really a pain plus it been about three years sense you posted this part if you weren't going to continue it you shouldn't have left us hanging!

emma a great story i look foreward to the next part i agree withother comments that maybe if this sort of punishment was given we would all be happy and not worry about crooks etc

Ohhhhh, Emma, you must hurry up with the next part. I am just dying to see what will happen to Brad as she begins her new life. But a comment. Maybe, when males are convicted of a crime, they should be forced to dress and act as ladies and maybe if they are very good at this, and then released, their criminal records could be expunged, giving them a new and clear life. Think about that, for a while. Wouldn't that be nice?

Barb

Very good so far I hope to see more of this story.

Please continue this story soon as it is very interesting.

Well, how long is it going to be before you continue this story?

Very good story. Please keep on writing. I hope you will.

Emma B...

To Be Continued? you ask...

I very much hope so!

Lovely story so far,
Regards,
Phillipa.

There is a nice flow to the story, but I think Brad gave in a little to easly. I am looking forward to a sec and third part of the story just to see where it will go.

Cool story please keep going!! I love the forced cd stories.
Great chain of events - thanks...

Although it may have the "typical plot" (not my words) of a "Bad Boy to Good Girl" story (so far), I felt that Brad was quite a believable character.  I'm quite eager to see how he does at school in his new uniform. :) Three cheers for the 'nerd' who stood up to him, as well.

//Note: Went looking for the story after seeing it on the polls.

Very typical plot so far, but one that I do enjoy! <giggle>  Looking forward to more...

This reads like the start of a very good "bad boy to good girl" story. I hope Emma shares the rest of Brad's adventures with us.

   Great start to a good story.  Please continue!!!

A truely lovely begining.