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Brandi's Use of the Computer
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Comment by whyguys on 04/01/09
Tell us more. Does Brandi end up in inter-NET STOCKINGS? Comment by Priscilla Ann on 01/15/08 Very interesting, Karen -- the use of the computer as somethjing other than a pleasuable experience, but almost as a punishment session for Brandi is ingenious. And leaving us all guessing whether Brandi's computer uniform is secretrarial or schoolgirlish is tittilating. Of course, I would opt for parachial school girl in six inch heels. But, to each her own. Bravo, Karen! Comment by julie j on 01/07/05 my comments remain the same as previous well written and explained but to shot Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/23/04 Sure sounds like a domme sub relationship to me. His choice, dictated by his wife, is to not use the computer at all or to use it but, in his own words, not have any fun at all, and he's meekly going along with it. Comment by julie j on 08/14/04 its a complicated settup between brandi& his wife it must be torture chained into a hard stool to use the pc a leson learned no doubt a very good intro that needs more to finish it as a story Comment by Tiffany Jean on 11/14/03 Great intro! I can't wait to hear more. You write some of the best stories! I would love to know where you get your inspiration from. Comment by Misti on 11/04/03 Hey- c'mon Karen- give us more! What about Brandi's new outfit and her experiences when she's online all day? Won't there be further forays out into the world en femme? Let's have a sequel(s)! Comment by Nellie D on 11/04/03 Sounds like a good way to break a person from computer use. |
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