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The Brass Bottle
by Valentina Michelle Smith

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Comment by Aleesha on 06/17/09
If it were at all possible I would love to have a similar brass bottle but sadly they don't exist. I'll eagerly await your next installment.

Comment by Molly on 04/22/08
As other commentators have pointed out, there is much more missing from this story than 30 million bucks. The main thing missing is a main character who asks questions before he makes his decisions, so that the reader is left with little information. In the end, an occasional crossdresser is in possession of the means to become a genetic woman, and all he knows about what will happen is that 1) she will be beautiful, and 2) the change will be permanent. A fun little teaser, if a bit annoying. Perhaps the lesson lying between the lines is: presented with an opportunity that can bring radical and fundamental changes, it might be a good idea to ask more and better questions!

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/09/07
TINA, QUESTION IS, WILL HE BE ABLE TO ACCESS HIS SWISS BANK ACCOUNT IF HE BECOMES A WOMAN. YOU DEFINITELY NEED TO CONTINUE THIS CUTE STORY.

Comment by johncorc on 08/03/06
Hi, I'm John who supported you on Stardust during the irritatant troll tirade. Really thought brass bottle was cute and imaginative. I'm here at Story site seeking some classic stuff I read was great and some yet unsampled "Tina"! Was hoping to find Tom Clancy and JK Rowling but have struck out. Any Suggestions ?
Thank-you Dear Friend, john

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/06/03
If I were mark, I would take Dave's comment about being vindictive seriously.  All Mark specified about being a woman was beautiful; everything else was presumably left up to Dave - Can anyone think beautiful submissive nympho bimbo totally in love with Dave???  Maybe Dave's friendliness was an act designed to keep mark from questioning what kind of beautiful woman?

Comment by Michellemarie on 06/24/03
What a beautifully written story.... I'm off to the antiques shop !!

Comment by Portia on 06/18/03
I certainly would not have any problem deciding what to do. And, with that money I would make certain my loved ones and deserving organizations would be well taken care of.  What more could someone ask for?  Thank you for the tease.

Portia

Comment by Mae on 06/18/03
Nice story, but did the djinn (or the IRS) take $30 million USD in taxes from Mark's account when the first wish was fulfilled? :-)

Comment by Hu Mi on 06/18/03
I just finished reading Brass Bottle.  Oh, that was the PERFECT ending!  I just love it when writers leave the outcome up to the reader's imagination!  Nicely done, and thank you!

Mi



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