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The Brat Meets Her Match
by Hiliary Mariadubh nicSeamus

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Comment by check this out on 11/20/13
we5nlo Really enjoyed this article. Want more.

Comment by julih on 03/11/13
good story but to light for the brat

Comment by Rashauni on 12/08/08
Now that's a video I'd love to see!

Comment by julie j on 07/09/04
an intresting scenario bit to much of the brat word andmost of this is reapeated it would be better for a better explanation i have tried myself and have done fairly well with escaping from bondage but i have met a match i visit some one when i can and we have a good session which last about5 hours normally and my efforts are well& truly tested to the limit the score at the moment is five to the mistress and 3 to me i owe  her 3 punishments of her choice at my next session

Comment by hILIARY on 09/13/03
Gail

I have used "Slave Solution" extensively in my self-be adventures.  My doms (When I can get together with one of them) also use it on me.  
Problem is that some people think IT IS NOT SEVERE ENOUGH!!!
Maybe they should try it first -- I am sure they will agree it is severe enough :)

Really - while umplesant, there is a practical use for it - I was born with a damagaed airway and it was repaired, but it is partially blocked.  The menthol and euctlypsus oil in the "Listerine" helps keep my airway m oist so I don't panic from fears of not breathing.

luv
hiliary

Comment by Gail on 09/01/02
Another very nice story Hiliary!  I was pleased to finally find out what "Slave Solution" was... my immigination was going wild on that one.  If I may ask, is there something special about that combo that you like?  Have you ever tried it, or anything else?

Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing your work in the future,
As always,
Kisses,
Gail

Comment by Mr hush on 08/02/02
well, I hope the Mistress likes her around the world trip! She should free him in about a month.



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