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The Breadwinner
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by Vicki Smith on 07/20/18
This was one of your "tougher" reads.  I so love your stories but the wife was beyond abusive.  The story was fine up until the beach scene, no way does the switch flip like that and she starts cheating. I do agree with NDC, The real whore turned out to be his wife, not his old boss.

Comment by thewallis on 06/18/17
He was not much of a man. If my wife tried that shit on me, I would have beat the crap out of her, the neighbour and the whore from work.

Comment by letterman on 02/15/15
Straight down to a top divorce lawyer mental cruelty large part of her estate in divorce settlement. See her shock then

Comment by ravi on 02/25/14
such a worst story. Mike was such a jerk. How can people may let thing happen to them.

Comment by Silvia. on 10/25/09
I didn't like the story again.
Sue is evil, and don't deserve to be happy. I think she'll never be.
Barbie is a fool, and never was a real man.
Silvia.

Comment by julie j on 09/18/04
what a wicked story well written a twist at the end where he decided he wanted to be female an intersting way to go wellwritten great story you are a very good writer

Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/01/04
Like a lot of so called Macho men notice macho not masculine there is a differance . Macho men deep down have that girl or gay or something inside they hide  masculine men true masculine men dont they dont go around shouting the odds and giving bother as they know that they are men.But macho  SO CALLED men are hiding something I know because one time I was a real macho jerk  being a fighting trouble some jerk now far better as Jane.So  Mike was far better when she found herself and all the better for it in her life and herself

Comment by NDC on 07/30/04
Good story. Poor Mike thought the whore was the woman he thought got promoted over him. The real whore turned out to be his wife.

Comment by janie on 07/28/04
Fun story, but I'm not sure about dressing up like a girl making you want to do housework :-)



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