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The Breaking Point
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Irene on 03/13/08
Wow!!!!! What a story!  Please write more like this one.  His gradual and total surrender to the feminized sissy Mistress Jessica changes Toney into is sooo erotic.  That brings up a question and observation, have you, or do you know of people or organizations who use mind control techniques to totally convert a person from who they were into a personna designed by someone who has dominated them?  The way you described the expected effects on Toni during his forced transformation hinted to me that maybe you know quite a bit about mind control techniques that are beyond what's available to the general and professional public.  Please write more stories where you employ this approach.

Comment by juliej on 02/28/06
the story is great the part that broke him was interesting the only part i did not like was the part about the gir/son that i feel is not good and not for me good story though



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