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Comment by Angie on 10/23/14
You should consider writing in the general suspense/crime thriller mainstream market. This was a very intense story. Comment by Arquebus on 08/08/09 Excellent story. Round characters, horizontal and vertical movement, action/reaction storytelling. One of the best TG stories I've ever read. Thanks for sharing, Fran. Comment by Danielle on 10/21/07 Way to go Fran, Comment by Jamie on 10/01/07 Goodniss! Hey im Jamie ,justa reader as of now but a soon to be writer, I hope. I liked or rather I loved your story and was moved literally on edge through out it's entirety as to wether or not if she would eves escape clear enough she did but I was kinda sad she could'nt save Debbie. The story was not empty feeling not by a long shot, as most of mine are, my pesonel faves are forced feminization schools. but not that you'll ever read this. though i just thought to show my enjoyment and appreciation Comment by juliej on 06/30/07 a great story of forced fem &the results of an investigation &trial what a way to go and how far to get it sorted out brillinat more please Comment by suna on 02/06/06 I enjoyed your story. Most of the horror stories stop where the victim gives in letting the protaganist think they have won. Those stories actually stop at the middle of the story. At some point the victim will revolt or go mad sitting and drooling when the mind gives way. I know its not real, my word, I hope there is nothing like that in the world. Your story of continued thought on escape was an excellent view of the attempt to have a 'realistic' ending of the plot. Comment by BJP on 05/28/04 WHY CAN'T THERE BE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS? IF YOU KNOW OF ANY EMAIL THE TITLE AN WERE I CAN FIND THEM, GREAT STORY Comment by Slothrop on 03/31/04 Fantastic read. You were a bit light on the retribution, and there was only a minimum necessary violence but it worked for me. (Just kidding) Comment by Jane Hudson on 12/05/03 Hell of a story my dear.Not the normal sissy this one had teeth. Comment by Jaycee on 12/05/03 Very intense... and a very good read. I echo the other views here about fighting back... assuming you're fortunate enough to have a jailer with 5lb handcuffs! Comment by Jennifer on 12/05/03 Right On Sister!!! Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 12/04/03 "Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose." BRAVO!!!! Finally, the bad gals get theirs. Comment by Pervette on 12/04/03 I was afraid that I might post an inadvertent spoiler, but I see Comment by Annie O on 12/04/03 Gee! This is the kind of story i would have liked to have written. So good, so intense -- it does make me wonder if a lot of "sissies" are brainwashed into thinking they are what they are. Comment by Cathy_t_ on 12/04/03 VERY well done, Fran! It's about TIME someone wrote a story in which the "vicious Dommes" get their just desserts! You did a very good job indeed with the thoughts of the hero(ine) and I was particularly pleased that you didn't cut any corners as far as the violence end of things went. |
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