I think it was a very hot, sexy, erotic, story and i loved it, it is fantasy afterall, not an actual account of this happening.  Whilst i sgree it is wrong to put children in this position, it is a story after all, and no-one was hurt or abused to get it to you.

its a hard story somewhat illegal without parents permission a leeson needs to be taught the hard way but for a male teacher to do it this wrong it should have been female teachers and the teacher should not have eceeded his authority without clearing it first this can go many ways

Well,

after having written two e-mails directly to you which donīt matter to you finally I mouth my concerns publicly. I totally agreee with Sassy Sue and also think itīs a well written story but I donīt like you putting a teen in such a situation where an adult takes advantage of him. Well, you have told me this was just my opinion but except for Sassy Sueīs comment I donīt see any other comment and she obviously agrees with my concerns. So I wonder where are the many other opinions and comments? To tell me to be more open minded about things is really a feeble attempt to defend yourself having written a story which includes non-consensual sex between an adult and a teen. Sorry gurl, this has nothing to do with being not open minded. I simply donīt agree with such an act.

camila

A well written, hot, erotic, sexy story.  I'm just a little concerned about the sex between an adult and very young teen.

SS