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The Bridal Gown
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mariah on 05/02/13
Yet another fantasy come true, How lucky for Diane.  Giving her contra-therapy hormones without knowledge or her consent, unthinkable in this day and age but plausible with the right connections and enough determination.

Comment by Rone Welles on 10/13/06
lovely story I liked the way She started to think about herself..
the family support and the PILLS are strange but it seems mother knows best....
thank you ...Rone

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/03/05
I really didn't like the way mom and Mrs. Grant just kept assuming things and making decisions for Don and/or Diane without his/her knowledge or consent.  that was wrong of them and that is not altered by Diane's consent after the fact..  Especially, why keep the hormones secret?  Diane had already decided to stay Diane for good.  The only reason I can think of is that mom was putting what she wanted first, adding some "daughter insurance" to prevent even the slight chance of Donald re-emerging.



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