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Bride Reversed
by Jim Rossi

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Comment by Karen on 01/14/19
What the fuck is was this?

Comment by thisisme on 02/03/14
Apart, from hating the story again because it misses the element of Karma, this story lacks definition. I demonstrate the example by asking this question.... How does the family feel about what is done to him? There are other aspects that are simply missing. It isn't a terrible story; I just feel a good portion of it (the conclusion) is missing.

Comment by juliej on 09/03/06
a bizzare tale with unexpected consequences but interesting

Comment by Nadine on 08/19/04
An utterly dark tale, somehow made charming by a Yoda like use of language. How Bizarre!

Comment by jasmine on 08/19/04
What else could The 'husband' do, She has lost her freedom, gender and hope. all that is left is death. she would probably take that option soon. hopefully she will turn the tables like sleeping with the enemy or the burning bed.



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