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Brother and Sister
by Suzi Page

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Comment by WannabeGinger on 06/19/08
Well, I agree it's long, but the pace is worth sticking with - there are many significant steps in Judy's development and each in itself is joyful.... What a lucky girl! I love the detail in the clothing descriptions and I'd actually like more in the hair and beauty department please!! Nice work! LOL WbG xx
Comment by Bob on 05/10/08
This story consists mainly of clothing descriptions. It is in need of heavy editing and size reduction.
Comment by Elizabeth Rees on 10/03/05
This was a long, but unfortunately very monotonous and boring story. Thing is, it was obvious from the very start where it was going, but there was no drama, or characterisation, or interest, in between. It should have been shortened and pepped up.
Comment by Francine on 09/25/04
Hi Suzi  :)

This is a very interesting storyline. You did a great job with it.
Hugs, Fran
Comment by Diane Sutton on 02/26/02
This was an interesting story where a brother and sister formulate an interesting goal in order to bring a little of the 2 sex's closer to gether.

I liked the way the routine was put in position to allow the 2 selected individuals to gain an insight into each others respective sexes.

The goal being meet and the eventual realization that this experiment with gender switching by way of clothes and hormones was something that was told with a very well delieverd structure.

I like the story and hope to read more of this author.

Diane


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