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Brotherly Love, Sisterly Love
by Jessica Swift

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Comment by nice seo guys on 11/20/13
J2vHHY Wow, great article.Much thanks again. Want more.

Comment by ratty on 12/31/09
Jessica, please continue with brotherly/sisterly love. it really is a great tale and needs to have a finish. don't leave us in suspense.

Comment by mike on 09/10/09
fantastic!hot sexy erotic! wow what a coming out story.the party was a dream come true.please continue writing.

Comment by J on 12/15/08
You are a master/mistress of erotic fiction.  You are touching so many chords in this one...desire to dress..incest...oh my God...I can't breathe when I read your stories.  You cannot imagine how many orgasms you have given me since I discovered your stories.

Comment by Jim on 11/22/08
OMG....I have been reading and re-reading this story for days.  Please, please write more...and call me when you make the movie!

Comment by Rose on 07/25/07
Hi Jessica,
  What a great story. I just loved it. Twin brothers / sisters what a great idea and a new dimension.
Please bring on part 2; I cannot wait.

Luv Rose.


Comment by White on 07/21/07
I really enjoyed the story.  I has become one of my new favorites and I have taken the time to re-read it a number of times.  Please keep up the good work.

Comment by Joanne on 07/16/07
Great first part of the story, hope theres more to cum soon. Wonder what might happen to Rebecca & Rachel if big sis finds out. Perhaps she might help them find hunky boyfriends!!!

Comment by Anne Zvesteit on 07/16/07
Wow!  Very well written and extremely hot.

More, please!


Comment by jenna on 07/14/07
Thank you so much for writing such a sexy, erotic and wonderful story. I really like the character development and the first person accounts -- it makes it that much more sensual.
You have really found quite a premise in a community filled with sexy, all be it cliche' situations. Crossdressing incestous twins?!? Brilliant.
I also really enjoy the clothing descriptions. You have a fantastic start and I can hard-ly wait to see where you take us. Great work.
-Jenna



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