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Bubbles: Plan B
by Jennifer White

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Comment by jjconn on 06/01/17
she turned out to be vicious & cruel!! she took his life,his manhood,his past memory all for her selfish wishes & disires & called it love??? NOT he does'nt even know what he did wrong with the memory wipe, she turned him into a love slave for her own self centered reasons!!! how's he supposed to learn anything if he don't know what he did wrong in the first place??? she's worse than him be'in a cheater!!!!

Comment by Silvia. on 02/22/09
I really think the divorce would be better than this.
No woman do this to her husband, but certainty, they will prefer the divorce.
Silvia.

Comment by juliej on 04/19/08
as per my previous comments

Comment by juliej on 03/10/06
a very complex story about mind control and putting hank into his place now a woman forever this should be interesting iwould have liked another part to this story good story welldone

Comment by Early June on 09/02/04
Nice morality story.  Has a real bite at the end.  Hmmm-- Won't somebody come looking for Hank?  Well, I always like happy endings. Thanks again, talented Jen



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