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A Bunny's Tail
by Daisy Attaway

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Comment by Redjill Kodachi on 06/08/23
This is my all time favorite story. Thank you for writing it. I've done a lot of volunteer editing as a way of appreciation.

If there is anywhere else you have published stories, or anything else you have published that I can read, please contact me.


Comment by Royal CBD on 11/18/20
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Comment by see pron on 10/25/19
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Comment by suba me on 05/13/17
jxQ8nI Thanks for the article post.Really looking forward to read more. Really Great.

Comment by Our site on 02/01/17
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Comment by crorkz matz on 08/04/14
VLCkAw I am so grateful for your post.Thanks Again. Awesome.

Comment by cheap backlinks on 07/18/14
qm45eq I am so grateful for your post. Will read on...

Comment by ashley on 10/27/13
Glad we got the second part of this and hope there is more to come What a lovely couple !!

Comment by ashley on 08/08/13
Oh yes. second part should be really good - -- but what about the shoes?????? and the long gloves?????

Comment by julih on 01/29/13
a great story next part please

Comment by Shirley111 on 01/21/12
Brilliant story. Thank you so much

Comment by Silvia. on 09/01/11
This story is a shame, disgusting and sick.

Comment by lilben on 03/29/11
lucky bictch

Comment by Styler on 11/21/10
Let's continue the adventure.

Comment by Brenda Brennan on 10/24/10
That was a great read,  :-)  (-:  

Comment by juliej on 07/27/10
as per previous comments

Comment by juliej on 07/19/09
good story needs a bit more

Comment by opekiskagrl on 04/22/09
Thank you so much.

Comment by Lizzie on 03/08/09
Made my slut clit hard and oozing pre-cum. now I must go ask Mistress for permission to read more -----

Comment by mike on 12/18/08
loved the story.such sweet torture.how i'd love to be him.wonderful start of training.more please.

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 11/04/08
Nicely done, Mistress Kate. I hope to hear some further adventures and how you will continue to dominate and control your "barbie doll."

Comment by Helena on 08/14/08
Any vacancies?  What a terrific story.  More please Mistress!

Comment by juliej on 08/10/08
great story hope you continue

Comment by Stefan on 08/09/08
Just loved your story. I hope you will continue.

Comment by sheila brier on 08/04/08
Nice exciting and thrilling tale. Love sheila.

Comment by sissy kitty on 08/01/08
wow what two great little chapters to a story what could go even further to sissyhood i only wish that i myself was in this story in real life lets have more detail of sissy heels and painted toes too, can't wait for the next chapter please write soon x                    sissy kitty

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/20/08
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH IT?

Comment by Tiffany Jean on 07/19/08
Great story!! I can't wait to hear what she does with her toy next!  Keep up the great work!!

Kisses,
Tiffany Jean
aka the vinyl princess


Comment by Sarah H. on 07/18/08
Very good story, I hope that there more.

Comment by johnny on 06/25/08
WOW! What a story.  There is a sequel right?
We all need to know what humiliation Kate is going to put him through.



Comment by Sissy Phyll on 03/22/08

    I just read your story and loved it.  Jack/Lola ia such a lucky shemale to have such an understanding and ubderstanding mistress.  Kate is going to take him to experience the hidden desires he had hidden.  I just wish I had been so lucky as to have someonetake me to where I would love to have gone.  I'm so jealous Kate.  Hurry and write some more of this storyand the experiences you Lola is going to have.  Tell us more,soon.   Love sissy phyll

Comment by juliej on 03/20/08
great begining more please it need to be finished do not leave us in suspence

Comment by Lizzie on 03/10/08
Excellent beginning! MORE PLEASE!

Comment by Marti on 03/10/08
What a great "tail".  I read so much crap in these groups, but you are a real writer.  I am notorious in my company for correcting wording, spelling and punctuation in my colleagues writings, but they all send me their stuff before it is issued.  They don't want to look like ignorant fools.  As an experienced proofreader, I could not find a single mis-spelling or punctuation error.  As a much-published writer, I loved the storyline and the progression of the character.  As a horny male, it was worth the time to read your submission.  Thanks.

Comment by SassySue on 03/10/08
Very erotic.  Can't wait to read more.  No reason for the "X" rating since nothing happened . . . yet.

Keep up the good work!

SS


Comment by Michael and Michelle on 03/07/08
Hello dear friend,

I loved your story.  I became hard right away.  I like the slow introduction to his being a sissy cross dresser.  I have enjoyed being a cross dresser for over 20 years.  I own over 80 dresses and about 100 pair of high heeled (CFM) shoes.  I even laugh at myself when I think back to the fact that I own over 130 bras!!!

I am writing a book about my secret life as a cross dresser.  I would be happy to shar chapters of that book with anyone who enjoys erotic stories such as yours.  My hotmail contact is simply: mwylde39 at that location.

Love to you,

Michael & Michelle


Comment by billie on 03/07/08
What a great story. Your skill as a writer made me feel I was in the story.  Please continue

Comment by greta on 03/07/08
Hope this is just the start and you don´t leave us hanging in the air. Please continue. Good first effort!

hugs, greta


Comment by MJ on 03/06/08
I love this! I can't wait to read about more hairstyling to go with bunny ears :)

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 03/05/08
What a lovely beginning. I cannot wait to see what paces Mistress puts her little "bunny" through.

Comment by Chris on 03/05/08
 I just loved this story, how sexy it is! I just love the butt plug with the bunny tail, maybe I should get one of those.  Thanks,  Chris



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